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Could you please help to follow up? We must reply to customer before the cargo inspection date on 24 Jan 2. As per your advised that there ... Home Forums What'snew Members Login Register What'snew Search Newposts Searchforums Help Rules Menu Login Register Installtheapp Install Forums LearningEnglish AskaTeacher Youareusinganoutofdatebrowser.Itmaynotdisplaythisorotherwebsitescorrectly.Youshouldupgradeoruseanalternativebrowser. Pleasecorrectthesesentences Threadstarter Unregistered Startdate Jan17,2008 Status Notopenforfurtherreplies. U Unregistered Guest 1.IntheconversationwithMr.Wongtwodaysago,heisgoingtocheckthecartonboxquantityfromyourstorage,butnotanyinformationuntiltoday.Couldyoupleasehelptofollowup?Wemustreplytocustomerbeforethecargoinspectiondateon24Jan 2.Asperyouradvisedthatthereare1880pcsgoodscannotberepaired,wewillarrangeourQCtoyourfactoryfortheseinspection.PleasereadythemonJanuary21   Sortbydate Sortbyvotes C cclaff JuniorMember Joined Jan10,2008 MemberType Other Re:Pleasecorrectthesesentence,thankyou Unregisteredsaid: 1.IntheconversationwithMr.Wongtwodaysago,heisgoingtocheckthecartonboxquantityfromyourstorage,butnotanyinformationuntiltoday.Couldyoupleasehelptofollowup?Wemustreplytocustomerbeforethecargoinspectiondateon24Jan 2.Asperyouradvisedthatthereare1880pcsgoodscannotberepaired,wewillarrangeourQCtoyourfactoryfortheseinspection.PleasereadythemonJanuary21 Clicktoexpand... 1.AswediscussedwithMr.Wongtwodaysago,hewastocheckthenumberofcartonsinyourwarehouse,butwehavenotyetheardfromhim.Couldyoupleasefollowuponthis?WemustreplytoourcustomerbeforethecargoinspectiononJan.24. 2.Asyouadvisedusthatthereare1880itemsthatcannotberepaired,wewillarrangeforourQCtoinspecttheminyourfactory.PleasehavethemreadyonJanuary21.   Upvote 0 Downvote Z Zoe2008 KeyMember Joined Jan16,2008 MemberType StudentorLearner NativeLanguage Korean HomeCountry SouthKorea CurrentLocation China Re:Pleasecorrectthesesentence,thankyou cclaffsaid: 1.AswediscussedwithMr.Wongtwodaysago,hewastocheckthenumberofcartonsinyourwarehouse,butwehavenotyetheardfromhim.Couldyoupleasefollowuponthis?WemustreplytoourcustomerbeforethecargoinspectiononJan.24. 2.Asyouadvisedusthatthereare1880itemsthatcannotberepaired,wewillarrangeforourQCtoinspecttheminyourfactory.PleasehavethemreadyonJanuary21. Clicktoexpand... Thankyouforyourhelp:-D   Upvote 0 Downvote Status Notopenforfurtherreplies. Share: Facebook Twitter Reddit Pinterest Tumblr WhatsApp Email Share Link Forums LearningEnglish AskaTeacher ThisforumisdesignedsothatlearnerscanaskquestionstoteachersabouttheEnglishlanguage. PostTitles Threadtitlesshouldincludeallorpartoftheword/phrasebeingdiscussed.(Avoidphraseslike"HELP!","Urgent!","translationplease","howdoIsaythis","I'mnew"andsimilarexpressions.) AboutReplyingtoPosts: YouarewelcometoanswerquestionspostedintheAskaTeacherforumaslongasyoursuggestions,help,andadvicereflectagoodunderstandingoftheEnglishlanguage.Ifyouarenotateacher,youwillneedtostatethatclearlyinyourpost.Pleasenote,allpostsaremoderatedbyourin-houselanguageexperts,somakesureyoursuggestions,help,andadviceprovidethekindofinformationaninternationallanguageteacherwouldoffer.Ifnot,andyourpostsdonotcontributetothetopicinapositiveway,theywillbesubjecttodeletion. Homework: Pleasedon'taskustodoorcorrectyourhomework;thisisaplacetodiscusslanguage. Top



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