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Hey friends;would you help to check my english article/daily..Because my english grammar is so poor.you can show me where I made mistake and ... Home Forums What'snew Members Login Register What'snew Search Newposts Searchforums Help Rules Menu Login Register Installtheapp Install Forums LearningEnglish Editing&WritingTopics Youareusinganoutofdatebrowser.Itmaynotdisplaythisorotherwebsitescorrectly.Youshouldupgradeoruseanalternativebrowser. wouldyouhelptocheck? Threadstarter PhoenixWu Startdate Apr10,2008 Status Notopenforfurtherreplies. P PhoenixWu JuniorMember Joined Apr25,2007 MemberType StudentorLearner Heyfriends;wouldyouhelptocheckmyenglisharticle/daily..Becausemyenglishgrammarissopoor.youcanshowmewhereImademistakeandwhereiswrong.Pleasetellme,thanksalots.hehe...Now,Iamwriting....ManythingsIamunabletounderstandwhatIamthinkingandmanythingsIamfeelingstrange.It'ssohardtomadecleartounderstand.It'slong,long...longtimeago.It'sjuststorynow.Now,Ithinkit'sstupidstroy.Wecan'tchangeeverything.SoIthinkIshouldtrytolearnhowtoforgetit.ButIneedtotime.Iknow,thisismytimeandit'smylife-style.Sothat'swhyIamthinkingIcanforgettohim.But,whyIamstilltomissingtohim.Nothingtochangeit.Whotellwhy?Havemanymemoriestomissing.Ifeelsohard.Ifeelsad.Idon'tknowwhoIam.However,Iknowitwaspassedtime.Everythingwasendofit.Comeongirl,hedoesn'tworthshouldyoudothat,youknow.It'sworthshouldyoudo--"whatdoyouwant"&"Goaroundyourdream".Please,tellyourselfhowtochangeeverything,howtochangeyourlife-style.Don'tbethinksomuch.Youjustneedtothinkinghowtopervieworchangeyourpoorenglish.Ishouldsay,IonlybelieveIcandoeverything.Justyouwouldliketotrytoeverything.Iwillbestrongthaneveryone.Nevergiveup.(Wouldyouhelptome,pleasecheckit.Iambegininglearnenglish.Thankyousomuch)   C curmudgeon KeyMember Joined Mar5,2006 MemberType RetiredEnglishTeacher NativeLanguage English HomeCountry UK CurrentLocation UK HiPhoenix. Yourwritingistoobusyandisrushingintoeachseparatepointyouaretryingtomake.Youmustslowdownalittleandtrytobreakitupintologicalpieces. Iwilltryandhelpyou. ManythingsIamunabletounderstandwhatIamthinkingandmanythingsIamfeelingstrange.It'ssohardtomadecleartounderstand. It'slong,long...longtimeago.It'sjuststorynow.Now,Ithinkit'sstupidstroy.Wecan'tchangeeverything.SoIthinkIshouldtrytolearnhowtoforgetit.ButIneedtotime.Iknow,thisismytimeandit'smylife-style.Sothat'swhyIamthinkingIcanforgettohim.But,whyIamstilltomissingtohim.Nothingtochangeit.Whotellwhy?Havemanymemoriestomissing.Ifeelsohard.Ifeelsad.Idon'tknowwhoIam.However,Iknowitwaspassedtime.Comeongirl,hedoesn'tworthshouldyoudothat,youknow.It'sworthshouldyoudo--"whatdoyouwant"&"Goaroundyourdream".Please,tellyourselfhowtochangeeverything,howtochangeyourlife-style.Don'tbethinksomuch.Youjustneedtothinkinghowtopervieworchangeyourpoorenglish.Ishouldsay,IonlybelieveIcandoeverything.Justyouwouldliketotrytoeverything.Iwillbestrongthaneveryone.Nevergiveup. Ifeelstrange.Iamunabletogathermythoughts,theyaresomany!Itissodifficultformetotryandmakesenseofthings Itallstartedsolongago,solongthatitseemsunreal.NowIbelieveitisnonsense,butithappenedandIknowIcan'tchangewhathashappened.AllIcandonowistryandforget.ButIneedtime,timetobemyselfagain. SonowIthinkImustforgethim.ButwhyamIstillmissinghim?NothingIdoseemstochangethewayIfeel.Cananyoneexplainthistome?Imisshimsomuchandfeelsosad.Idon'tknowwhoIamanymore,butIknowthatthiswillpassintime.Everythinghascometoanend... Comeongirl!...heisn'tworthit.Don'tthinklikethat.Itisimportantthatyoudowhatyouwantandpursueyourdreams.Tellyourselfyoucanchangethewayyoulive.Stopthinkingofwhathasbeenandlookahead.ImproveyourEnglish.Believethatyoucandoanythingyoutry,andtryeverything.Beasstrongasothersandnevergiveup.   D DavidL. VIPMember Joined Nov7,2007 MemberType Other Haveyouaclosefriendorrelativeyoucantalktowhenyoufeelupset? Ithinkyouwouldfindyouwouldfeelmuchbetter.Talkingtosomeoneelse,ratherthangoingroundandroundinourownthoughts,helpsustoseethingsmoreclearly-andtheycanbeverysupportivewhenyouarefeelingbad.   C curmudgeon KeyMember Joined Mar5,2006 MemberType RetiredEnglishTeacher NativeLanguage English HomeCountry UK CurrentLocation UK Que???Haha!   C curmudgeon KeyMember Joined Mar5,2006 MemberType RetiredEnglishTeacher NativeLanguage English HomeCountry UK CurrentLocation UK AmImissingsomethinghere?Hehe   P PhoenixWu JuniorMember Joined Apr25,2007 MemberType StudentorLearner DavidL.said: Haveyouaclosefriendorrelativeyoucantalktowhenyoufeelupset? Ithinkyouwouldfindyouwouldfeelmuchbetter.Talkingtosomeoneelse,ratherthangoingroundandroundinourownthoughts,helpsustoseethingsmoreclearly-andtheycanbeverysupportivewhenyouarefeelingbad. Clicktoexpand... Ihave...butIthinkit'ssohardtotellmyfriend..Theywilldon'tunderstandwhatIsayifItellthem.Theydon'tunderstandhowamIfeeling.Sothat'swhyamImissing...SometimesIfeelbad,sometimeIfeelgood.. thankyouforyourcare..:-D   P PhoenixWu JuniorMember Joined Apr25,2007 MemberType StudentorLearner curmudgeonsaid: AmImissingsomethinghere?Hehe Clicktoexpand... Youaremissing..??Missingwhat??hehe;-)   C curmudgeon KeyMember Joined Mar5,2006 MemberType RetiredEnglishTeacher NativeLanguage English HomeCountry UK CurrentLocation UK Well,Ithoughtyouwantedyourenglishcorrected.Itseemsfromothersresponsesthatyouarefeelingemotionallyupset.Idontthinkyourtoobadifyoucanstillsmilethough   Status Notopenforfurtherreplies. Share: Facebook Twitter Reddit Pinterest Tumblr WhatsApp Email Share Link Forums LearningEnglish Editing&WritingTopics Pleasenotethatpostscannotbedeletedfromthewritingsection.Wewillnotremovetextsthathavebeencorrected,sopleasedonotpostanypersonalinformationinthissection,especiallyinthingslikeletters. Top